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"Tell Me About the Girl"

Tell me about the girl with hair so dark
Who spoke in whispers, like a silenced lark
With hands that danced like petals in the wind
Who wrote in words that made your head spin?

Tell me about the girl with eyes of stars
Who saw things so near and very far
With a mind of wit, full of wonder and joy
And whose dream you nearly destroyed?

Tell me about the girl with a destiny bright
Who broke her to heart to give people light
With a heart of love and soul so pure
Who left with so much pain to endure?

Tell me about the girl who cradled a dream
Who created new worlds and heroes that gleamed
With a pen as a sword and a will so brave
Who you tried so hard to save?

Tell me about the girl who is seen at night
Who dances with stars and flies with comets bright
With a soul that now swims oceans deep
Who haunts you soundly in your sleep?

Tell me about the girl you wish to hear
Who at night whispers to you dear
With memories has clear as the moon and sun
Who you still believe is the one?
I was looking through some of my old notebooks *trying to find some old research material for a novel* and I came across this old poem I wrote a couple years ago, probably eighth or ninth grade. Nothing special, but I edited up a bit and decided to post it up before I forget about it.

Hope you guys enjoy!:D
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blueskysummer Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful words. the world needs more poems such as these. it has perfect rythm, and could have many different meanings, giving it so many more dimentions.
keep it up.
beastofthenight Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
beautiful :clap:
Miapet Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Awesome... :aww:

sioraine Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
:wow: Lost for words.

Rhythm and rhyme. :heart:
vp21ct Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
I found this really old story I had written, back when I was heavy into my 'furry phase'.

Oh and also, KEEP WRITING. Writing = awesome.

And I don't feel useless when I see good writing, because I know there are others like me.
leangreenlimabean Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Student Writer
I just got a great story/song idea from this, thank you so much! Stuff that gives you inspiration is the best stuff around!
HealerCharm Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful my dear~ :aww: :hug: <33
MutouMiriku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009 bad is it that I've already got possible story ideas from this? The images here are absolutely wonderful, and I might be digging too deep, but I can see a lot of alternate meanings in here...^^ Awesome stuff! Keep it up, Strix-san!
hollywood-logic Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
It's lovely...
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